Scholarship / Applying KGSP Korean Language and Literature majoring in Teaching Korean As a Foreign Language [5]

Hello everyone,
I need a help with the study plan. I made a draft of it, but I still don't have any clue does my study plan already correct or does it out of line. Is my study plan already explain all the points of it?

I am applying KGSP for the Korean Language and Literature majoring in Teaching Korean As a Foreign Language and I will apply through university track. Help me :(

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The main points of the Study Plan: "Goal of study, title or subject of research, and detailed study plan"

Study Plan presentation

I would like to apply for the Master's Degree in Korean Language and Literature department majoring in Teaching Korean As a Foreign Language at the XXX University because I have a high interest in Korean language since I was kid and learning Korean already become my hobby plus I made thesis about Korean Language for my last final project in the university. During my studies, I will spend my spare time to read so many Korean books as much as I can and analyze the grammar structure then let myself fully understand all the grammars. I will make friend with Korean friends to practice my Korean speaking ability. As a human, we do need communication so we need to learn the proper pronunciation of the language so the native speaker could understand what are we going to say. I will also do extra study at least 2 hours a day in order to get good mark in the class and get high score in TOPIK. If there is a possibility, I would gladly participate in Korean Language speaking contest or Korean Language writing contest to prove my ability in Korean Language. I believe that this Master Program will provide me the chance to get to know more about Korean Language and I can achieve my goal to be master in Korean Language both grammatically or speaking ability.

In the master program, I plan to conduct a research about the most effective way of learning Korean Language as a foreigner. As we know Indonesian Language is quite different grammatically with Korean Language so some of them have difficulties of understanding the grammar and the pronunciation as well that's why some of Indonesian think that Korean Language is difficult and doesn't want to study more. In order to help Indonesian to learn Korean Language, I will do research about it more, finding out the similarities in both vocabularies or pronunciation that will help them to learn easier.

I contend that this research will be valuable in the future considering to the issues that most Indonesians have when they learning Korean Language as a foreigner. I hope with this research many foreigners especially Indonesians will understand Korean Language easily and will not think that Korean Language is difficult to study.