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May 31, 2018
Writing Feedback / The shares of six age groups of both sexes who did exercises frequently in 2010 in Australia [3]

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The bar chart compares the shares of six age groups of both sexes who did exercises frequently in 2010 in Australia. Overall, men intended to do more regular activity than women when they were in twenties.

As can be seen from the bar chart, men occupied over a half, namely 52.8% of proportion of doing regular physical activity when they were in teenagers. Meanwhile, at this age, women did less physical exercises, with roughly 5% compared with the opposite sex. Over the lifetime, women intended to do exercises frequently than men, experienced a gradual increase to 53.3% when they were from 45 to 54 years old. However, at the age group from 55 years old to the end of lifetime, the proportion of doing physical activity for women witnessed a steady decline to 47.1% at the end of the period.

Australian males, in contrast, they did this kind of activity generally less than women did. The proportion stood at 47.7% whey they were in teenagers, then, it plummeted remarkably to 39.5% when they were in middle-ages. However, the trend of doing physical activity for men intended to rise back when they became older, namely comprising 46.7% at the age group of 65 and over, which was similar to the percentage for women at this age group.
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