citygirl
Oct 31, 2018
Scholarship / Chevening Leadership essay -- innovation in the newsroom [6]
@thk
Hi, I think your content has potential, but there are lots of spelling and grammar errors. I think you may have used the word 'appraisal' when you mean 'praise'? the two have different meanings! The same with 'complain', in this context you may need to use 'complaints' or 'complained'. You need to rewrite these bits according the rules of grammar.
Your story about the trend report you initiated is interesting but is unclear from your narration. Do see if you can get your points across more coherently!
@thk
Hi, I think your content has potential, but there are lots of spelling and grammar errors. I think you may have used the word 'appraisal' when you mean 'praise'? the two have different meanings! The same with 'complain', in this context you may need to use 'complaints' or 'complained'. You need to rewrite these bits according the rules of grammar.
Your story about the trend report you initiated is interesting but is unclear from your narration. Do see if you can get your points across more coherently!
