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Nov 14, 2018
Writing Feedback / Memoir - writing sample (first day at school) [3]
first day at school and they aske me to write this ....
Memoir - writing sample
1 think of something memorable that change your life significantly.
2 write One paragraph memoir to explain how or why it changed your life.
3 remember to use correct paragraph form :
a) topic sentence
B) 3 PPas
c)concluding sentence
There are a whole host of reasons why people decide to move to another country. Living overseas can offer new opportunities, new lifestyles, new careers, and a new direction. I could relate to all of those people who moved to a new country to explore more about themselves and to explore more opportunities as well. I, along with my family, moved to Canada a few years ago. It was not easy for us to leave everything behind and head towards a fresh new start, but it was definitively the best thing that happened to us, because now we can build an all-new lifestyle. It feels like home now and we all are on our track to achieve our goal. I am currently going to an adult learning centre and planning to go to a University. At the end, people move from one place to another to explore more opportunities, yet it takes a lot effort and sacrifice to stand firm and make moves, but I could not have imagined a better living and better education anywhere else in the world than Canada.
first day at school and they aske me to write this ....
Memoir - writing sample
1 think of something memorable that change your life significantly.
2 write One paragraph memoir to explain how or why it changed your life.
3 remember to use correct paragraph form :
a) topic sentence
B) 3 PPas
c)concluding sentence
There are a whole host of reasons why people decide to move to another country. Living overseas can offer new opportunities, new lifestyles, new careers, and a new direction. I could relate to all of those people who moved to a new country to explore more about themselves and to explore more opportunities as well. I, along with my family, moved to Canada a few years ago. It was not easy for us to leave everything behind and head towards a fresh new start, but it was definitively the best thing that happened to us, because now we can build an all-new lifestyle. It feels like home now and we all are on our track to achieve our goal. I am currently going to an adult learning centre and planning to go to a University. At the end, people move from one place to another to explore more opportunities, yet it takes a lot effort and sacrifice to stand firm and make moves, but I could not have imagined a better living and better education anywhere else in the world than Canada.