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Posts by Mermaid1
Joined: Sep 24, 2009
Last Post: Sep 25, 2009
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Mermaid1   
Sep 25, 2009
Writing Feedback / A paragraph about Dreams [9]

Hi EF
Thank you for your help. Can you tell me when lam able to delete the pronouns when the meaning is clear.I did so because l found the meaning is clear.

Thank you in advance
Mermaid1   
Sep 25, 2009
Writing Feedback / A paragraph about Dreams [9]

Hi
Please l want some one to check the mistakes on what l wrote about dreams.
Mermaid1   
Sep 25, 2009
Writing Feedback / A paragraph about Dreams [9]

Dreams are just like flowers,we can't imagine our life without and as such we have to take care of just as we do with flowers to grow up as we want. Every one in this life has his own dreams and lam that one who has alot of dreams and l would like all my dreams to come true one day. One of my dreams is to take a trip around the world, so that l would be able to get knowledge and insight about that an unknown world for me. I know that is impossible to happen but l belive in God's power that can be able to turn the impossible to sth possible. For that l keep on praying him to make it true.
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