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motivation letter - ism

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my vigorous interest in applying to the Information Systems Management (ISM) master degree.
First of all, currently I am studying a BA degree in Business Administration at the Baku Engineering University. Besides the education, I have a job in Azmarketing LLC as a marketing expert which helps me a lot to build a strong background for my future career and my core duty is related with technology like researching and analyzing a variety of marketing information. But due to lack of IT skills I left behind and can't meet the technological demands of today's market which is getting bigger as technology improved and integrated more to the business world by every passing day.

In order to improve the necessary skills to succeed in today's market I tried to learn from online courses, books etc. but no matter what I did it is not enough to compete with a new era that technology brings. I have decided to leave the job to experts in this field and take a master degree with teachers who had enough experience and knowledge about Technology. I have adjudicated to apply for this program because I am sure that it would enrich my future studies strongly and assist me in my prospective career. I have chosen to apply for ISM master degree because I really like the study plan and especially appreciate the wide range of offered courses and the freedom in making your study plan. Many of the courses offered are unique for me because there is no equivalent at my home university. And minor specializations gives me the opportunity to deepen my knowledge and skills in a field that is of my interest or to broaden my horizons by discovering a whole new area of study which is I extremely ravenous about.

I investigated for months and took advice from my friends and finally found VSE and fell in love with it because of many reasons. The program I applied for is the 6th best programme in Eastern Europe according to the Eduniversal Ranking, that was the first sign for me that my choice was absolutely right. Diving deep in searching I found 'xPORT' Business Accelerator in which I can put into practice my ideas of contributing to society with any kind of method. I want to benefit from people who have great experience and knowledge to teach me the skills I need in the IT field and it would be a great honor for me to learn from the doc. Ing. Ota Novotny, Ph.D., Ing.Martin Potancok, Ph.D. and other great experts in the Information Technology field. Moreover, I am confident that my experience in VSE would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development.

Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Zamir Abdulzada