Undergraduate / Biology study - What are your career goals and how did you develop them? [3]

Hello all,
Here is my written response for my short answer question(400 character limit). I would appreciate any feedback.

What are your career goals and how did you develop them?

My goal is to study biology and enter the medical field. I've always liked working with children, getting to know them, and helping them. What I would like to do in life is to become a pediatrician so I can help children be healthy to the best of my abilities.

Thank you so much for your help!