NirajP
Mar 23, 2019
Scholarship / Scholarship essay for Opportunity Fund Program by Usef...any suggestions ? [2]
I faced a challenge at the end of my first year of college . I got diagnosed with varicocele (enlargement of veins within loose bag of skin that holds testicles);yet I continued to earn ideal grades.I deserve this opportunity because I have a determination to strive to achieve my goals,no matter what obstacle I have to overcome.
I was shocked when there doctor told me I had to undergo a surgery;otherwise,the pain could be prolonging and it might cause infertility problem in the future.It was all of a sudden.So, It was a difficult situation for me to keep balance between my health status and my academics. Also,for my parents to manage expenses for the treatment .
On the other hand,keeping the fear of the surgery aside,I was worried about losing my academic consistency. "I will ruin my annual college examination and coming CAIE(Alevel) examination",I thought frequently.I did not want this unwanted situation to ruin my one year of learning at this very last moment.Also,I wanted to show my parents that I was thankful for what they did for my recovery. I could achieve this both desire by one effort - getting higher grades.
With a great ambition to achieve this burning desire,I changed my daily routine.I slept less than usual,wasted less time in social sites ,and focused only on one thing - to study.Hopefully,It all worked for me,and I graduated at the top of my class in the annual examination and earned exemplary grades on my CAIE(Alevel) examination.Also,I was granted with a full fee waiver.
I take my education very seriously, and I have the passion and determination to become a fine student in the future.I am an innovative problem solver and a critical thinker.And most importantly,I can overcome any hurdles that comes in my life when it takes to achieve a success in whatever thing I wish to do.
Although my parents have given me many supports, I have received a limited financial assistance because the income source is divided to support the education of my brother,my sister and me(third child).So,receiving this fund will boost my self-confidence, knowing that I not only completed a very important task, but also took the responsibility of creating a foundation for getting me closer to pursuing an engineering degree in the US.
self-confident, ambitious problem solver
I faced a challenge at the end of my first year of college . I got diagnosed with varicocele (enlargement of veins within loose bag of skin that holds testicles);yet I continued to earn ideal grades.I deserve this opportunity because I have a determination to strive to achieve my goals,no matter what obstacle I have to overcome.
I was shocked when there doctor told me I had to undergo a surgery;otherwise,the pain could be prolonging and it might cause infertility problem in the future.It was all of a sudden.So, It was a difficult situation for me to keep balance between my health status and my academics. Also,for my parents to manage expenses for the treatment .
On the other hand,keeping the fear of the surgery aside,I was worried about losing my academic consistency. "I will ruin my annual college examination and coming CAIE(Alevel) examination",I thought frequently.I did not want this unwanted situation to ruin my one year of learning at this very last moment.Also,I wanted to show my parents that I was thankful for what they did for my recovery. I could achieve this both desire by one effort - getting higher grades.
With a great ambition to achieve this burning desire,I changed my daily routine.I slept less than usual,wasted less time in social sites ,and focused only on one thing - to study.Hopefully,It all worked for me,and I graduated at the top of my class in the annual examination and earned exemplary grades on my CAIE(Alevel) examination.Also,I was granted with a full fee waiver.
I take my education very seriously, and I have the passion and determination to become a fine student in the future.I am an innovative problem solver and a critical thinker.And most importantly,I can overcome any hurdles that comes in my life when it takes to achieve a success in whatever thing I wish to do.
Although my parents have given me many supports, I have received a limited financial assistance because the income source is divided to support the education of my brother,my sister and me(third child).So,receiving this fund will boost my self-confidence, knowing that I not only completed a very important task, but also took the responsibility of creating a foundation for getting me closer to pursuing an engineering degree in the US.
