Writing Feedback / WRITING IELTS TASK 1: The process of milk production [4]

how the MILK is being processed

The diagram illustrates how to produce milk.
It is clear that there are five main stages in the process, beginning with cow grazing and ending with the final products in shelves of supermarket.

Looking at picture more details, in the initial of stages of the process, cows are fed on grass in grazing land. Fresh milk is collected by a milking machine twice a day before transporting to refrigeration storage. After that, tankers used for delivering refrigeneration mik to Dairy where milk - stable product and secondary products include cheese, cream, butter are produced. The next important step, milk will be pasteurized by high temperature and colled to kill harmful bacteria.

The process finished with packing in bottles and delivering final milk products to supermarket or shops where people could buy them.

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