Scholarship / Leadership is about making good decisions. Chevening essay [4]

moo 33, i wish you a good luck as I'm trying to apply the same internship and up till now. I think your essay is very good, but you have some of the grammatical mistakes. i advice you to recheck on your grammar. there's many websites, which do what I am talking about. I support the previous feedback and add to it the following; try to connect the actions you mentioned in the introduction that you think it make a good leader with your two examples to make your essay linked