laabobe
Dec 1, 2019
Writing Feedback / ielts task 2 (agree or disagree that wealthy countries should help poor countries.............) [4]
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Laabobe
Question:
Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.
Do you agree and disagree?
Answer:
Due to the humanitarian consideration, those well-off countries should have obligation to help poor nations in order to walk through the dilemma of natural disasters. This essay agrees with this statement because the first aid is not developed well to save the people's lives and the financial condition is weak to rebuild in poor countries.
Poor nations do not have enough resources to save people who are suffering in natural disasters. It is clear that emergency service is utmost essential towards natural disasters and the golden time of saving victims is just 3 days. If wealthy countries come and give a helping hands to poor nations, it can speed up the time of searching the missing which increase the survival rate. Moreover, the injured patients can also receive proper treatments to avoid further viral infection which may cause a big outbreak of serious diseases in that region. For example, the earthquake happened in China in 2008 caused thousands of people death. With the help of other countries, first aiders and immediate food packages had been sent and saved a lot of people's lives.
Rebuilding the countries is impossible with insufficient financial reserve. Many infrastructures are collapsed during the tragedy inevitably, they are needed to be reconstructed as soon as possible so as to resume residents' normal living and to increase the productivity of the countries. Without any help of developed countries, the poor one can only rebuild the country in an extremely slow speed and suffering continues even though citizens are physically recovered. For instance, South Korea donates and helps the government of Cambodia in protecting and fixing their heritage sites as they are too poor to do so.
In conclusion, poor nations should be assisted by rich countries regarding the humanitarian relief so that massive death can be avoided and reconstruction of the countries can also be facilitated during natural disasters.
Dear all,
Thank you for checking my essay!
Best,
Laabobe
Question:
Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters.
Do you agree and disagree?
poor nations should be assisted by rich
Answer:
Due to the humanitarian consideration, those well-off countries should have obligation to help poor nations in order to walk through the dilemma of natural disasters. This essay agrees with this statement because the first aid is not developed well to save the people's lives and the financial condition is weak to rebuild in poor countries.
Poor nations do not have enough resources to save people who are suffering in natural disasters. It is clear that emergency service is utmost essential towards natural disasters and the golden time of saving victims is just 3 days. If wealthy countries come and give a helping hands to poor nations, it can speed up the time of searching the missing which increase the survival rate. Moreover, the injured patients can also receive proper treatments to avoid further viral infection which may cause a big outbreak of serious diseases in that region. For example, the earthquake happened in China in 2008 caused thousands of people death. With the help of other countries, first aiders and immediate food packages had been sent and saved a lot of people's lives.
Rebuilding the countries is impossible with insufficient financial reserve. Many infrastructures are collapsed during the tragedy inevitably, they are needed to be reconstructed as soon as possible so as to resume residents' normal living and to increase the productivity of the countries. Without any help of developed countries, the poor one can only rebuild the country in an extremely slow speed and suffering continues even though citizens are physically recovered. For instance, South Korea donates and helps the government of Cambodia in protecting and fixing their heritage sites as they are too poor to do so.
In conclusion, poor nations should be assisted by rich countries regarding the humanitarian relief so that massive death can be avoided and reconstruction of the countries can also be facilitated during natural disasters.
