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Stevo99c

Oct 8, 2009

Essays / Help on inclass essay (my future career goals) [8]

I would like to do both, coach and teach at the same private school.
But I think they might be able to be combined into the essay?

Any ideas on thesis statement to open it, i need to get a good start then ill be able to keep writing

Stevo99c

Oct 8, 2009

Essays / Help on inclass essay (my future career goals) [8]

Hey,
I have to do an in-class on my future career goals. I have to make a strong thesis statement to start things off but I'm not sure how I would go about making one for a personal essay.

I want to
-become a private school teacher
-coach hockey and lacrosse (at school and outside)
-support my family and spend time
-maybe work with hockey organization somewhere

can you help me with a first paragraph please?

Thanks