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Feb 28, 2020
Writing Feedback / Computers play a really important role since they were invented in the last century [3]
Dear Mr/Ms,
Please kindly check my essay below and share your thoughts. Thanks a lot.
My essay:
It is said that computers have played a really important role since they were invented in the last hundred years. In my opinion, computers are the best tool that has been invented, however, we should not use them to replace all activities in our lives.
First of all, computers are the effective way helping people solve complexed questions relevant to mathematics. We now can use some extensions such as Excel to easily making calculations, report, etc,.. which is accurate and time-saving.
Secondarily, thanks to the internet, computers is the great tool that changes the whole world's communication. We can easily keep in touch with old friends who are at another haft of the earth via facebook, whatsapp, etc,.. Rather than that, people throughout the world can take classes or courses no matter where are they by attending online classes offered by various universities, institutes.
Moreover, computes have changed many aspects of economics such as sales, marketing,etc,.. nowadays, we can purchase everything and have it delivered to your home with only "1 click" and we now do see a tons of digital marketing tactics that help companies bring their products closer to targeted customers and we can easily find products or services that we are looking for.
Despite of the great role of computers in our lives, we should use it intentionally and do not let it win over all traditional aspects for example, we do need the old-school communication such as family gatherings. We should carefully protect our privacies whenever sharing anything publicly.
Dear Mr/Ms,
Please kindly check my essay below and share your thoughts. Thanks a lot.
Computers as the most important invention. What do you think?
My essay:
It is said that computers have played a really important role since they were invented in the last hundred years. In my opinion, computers are the best tool that has been invented, however, we should not use them to replace all activities in our lives.
First of all, computers are the effective way helping people solve complexed questions relevant to mathematics. We now can use some extensions such as Excel to easily making calculations, report, etc,.. which is accurate and time-saving.
Secondarily, thanks to the internet, computers is the great tool that changes the whole world's communication. We can easily keep in touch with old friends who are at another haft of the earth via facebook, whatsapp, etc,.. Rather than that, people throughout the world can take classes or courses no matter where are they by attending online classes offered by various universities, institutes.
Moreover, computes have changed many aspects of economics such as sales, marketing,etc,.. nowadays, we can purchase everything and have it delivered to your home with only "1 click" and we now do see a tons of digital marketing tactics that help companies bring their products closer to targeted customers and we can easily find products or services that we are looking for.
Despite of the great role of computers in our lives, we should use it intentionally and do not let it win over all traditional aspects for example, we do need the old-school communication such as family gatherings. We should carefully protect our privacies whenever sharing anything publicly.
