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Mar 30, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing task 1: Internet Users from countries as percentage of population 1999-2009 [9]
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The line graph give comparisons of the proportion of Internet usage in three nations between 1999 and 2009.
Overall, the percentage of three coutries' population using Internet witnessed an upward trend over the period of 10 years. However, there is a more significant rise in the proportion of American and Candian users compared to Mexicans ones.
In 1999, the amount of USA's citizens using Internet stood at the first position at about 20%, while the figures for Canadians and Mexicans were lower, at 5% and 10% respectively. The year 2005 remarked the similarity in the percentage of Internet users at approximately 70% in two countries USA and Canada. More Mexicans, at the same year 2005, used Internet than last 5 years, accouting for 25% of population. By 2009, almost 100% of Canadians using Internet, positing the highest. The number of users in USA was about 80%, which is 40% higher than that of Mexico.
the proportion of Internet usage in three nations
Please help me assess my ability. Here are my essay: ^-^ thanks
The line graph give comparisons of the proportion of Internet usage in three nations between 1999 and 2009.
Overall, the percentage of three coutries' population using Internet witnessed an upward trend over the period of 10 years. However, there is a more significant rise in the proportion of American and Candian users compared to Mexicans ones.
In 1999, the amount of USA's citizens using Internet stood at the first position at about 20%, while the figures for Canadians and Mexicans were lower, at 5% and 10% respectively. The year 2005 remarked the similarity in the percentage of Internet users at approximately 70% in two countries USA and Canada. More Mexicans, at the same year 2005, used Internet than last 5 years, accouting for 25% of population. By 2009, almost 100% of Canadians using Internet, positing the highest. The number of users in USA was about 80%, which is 40% higher than that of Mexico.
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