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Jun 1, 2020
Writing Feedback / The map below is the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. (cam 5 test 1) [2]
The map below illustrates for us about the town of Garlsdon. A novel supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map also gives us two possible areas for the supermarket.
As we can see, there are two place that is mentioned in the map. First area is countryside and the other is in town centre without traffic zone.
In the first site, we can see the square of this zone is as big as second zone is. However, there are many benefits for the supermarket when they palace it in this area. For example, it is close to both railway and main roads that people do not have to walk for a long distance
Although people in Garlsdon have to walk more than they do in the first site, it is more convenient for dwellers who live in Bransdon, Cransdon and people who are living in town centre because they do not have to move for a longer distance.
In conclusion, both areas has its own benefits and cons. So I think that both are able to be chosen as the place to build new supermarket.
Garlsdon town map essay
The map below illustrates for us about the town of Garlsdon. A novel supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map also gives us two possible areas for the supermarket.
As we can see, there are two place that is mentioned in the map. First area is countryside and the other is in town centre without traffic zone.
In the first site, we can see the square of this zone is as big as second zone is. However, there are many benefits for the supermarket when they palace it in this area. For example, it is close to both railway and main roads that people do not have to walk for a long distance
Although people in Garlsdon have to walk more than they do in the first site, it is more convenient for dwellers who live in Bransdon, Cransdon and people who are living in town centre because they do not have to move for a longer distance.
In conclusion, both areas has its own benefits and cons. So I think that both are able to be chosen as the place to build new supermarket.
