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training center vs an university

It is argued that the university is not better than a training center in the process of knowledge acquisition. However, from my point of view, the university is substantial to get good knowledge.

First, the university has prestigious curriculums recognized by the national education system, which is a significant place for a student to heighten their knowledge. In fact, there are now many documents but this makes you disoriented in learning because it is tough to find a qualified document for your demand. While there is much valuable academic knowledge in the university. You don't need to worry about that anymore. Examples, the document which the university must pay much money to get and classified according to each level of the student is chosen and studied by a professor on that field so it is credible. Another factor would be that Today, academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career. This means unless you have a degree in college, you will be tired of getting a good job. For instance, when a company interview, the certificate proves you experienced arduous processing in university and provide the most basic background of you. At least, you can stand a good chance of making a first impression with them because you had a great deal of effort and a serious attitude in your study.

All things considered, I once again reaffirm that the role of a university is consequential to attain adequate knowledge. However, I think we need to learn both the knowledge and skill to have well- rounded development.