thathu072
May 20, 2021
Writing Feedback / The bar chart compares water consumption for three main purposes in different places in the world [3]
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thathu072
May 19, 2021
Writing Feedback / The bar chart compares water consumption for three main purposes in different places in the world [3]
The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares water consumption for three main purposes in different places in the world
On an overall perspective, it is evident that most water in North America and Europe is for industrial use, while the majority of the amount of water in the other areas is used for agriculture.
In terms of using water for irrigation, it can be seen that Central Asia, Africa, South
East Asia, is in the top three areas using water, which register 88%, 84%, 81%, respectively. Simultaneously, the proportion of South America accounts for this purpose 71%, which is nearly 2.5 and 7 times as much as that in Europe and North America with 32% and 13%, sequentially.
Meanwhile, in North America and Europe, the allocation of industrial water consumption occupied the most, taking up 48% and 53% consecutively. Both records are about 5 times higher than as other areas, which is accounting under 13% for each one. Also, there is approximately a fifth and seventh of the amount of domestic water used for South America and Europe, respectively. This allocation of North America and Africa accounts for 13% and 9%, while in Central Asia and South East Asia, people consume the same amount of water at 7%.
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IELTS TASK 1 CAM 11 (205 words)
water used for different purposes
The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares water consumption for three main purposes in different places in the world
On an overall perspective, it is evident that most water in North America and Europe is for industrial use, while the majority of the amount of water in the other areas is used for agriculture.
In terms of using water for irrigation, it can be seen that Central Asia, Africa, South
East Asia, is in the top three areas using water, which register 88%, 84%, 81%, respectively. Simultaneously, the proportion of South America accounts for this purpose 71%, which is nearly 2.5 and 7 times as much as that in Europe and North America with 32% and 13%, sequentially.
Meanwhile, in North America and Europe, the allocation of industrial water consumption occupied the most, taking up 48% and 53% consecutively. Both records are about 5 times higher than as other areas, which is accounting under 13% for each one. Also, there is approximately a fifth and seventh of the amount of domestic water used for South America and Europe, respectively. This allocation of North America and Africa accounts for 13% and 9%, while in Central Asia and South East Asia, people consume the same amount of water at 7%.
Please help me with my writing skill ! Thanks for your kind words :3
IELTS TASK 1 CAM 11 (205 words)
