phuocsangle24
Jun 2, 2021
Writing Feedback / Writing task 2: My Father - Write about someone who inspires you [2]
TOPIC
What does this person do? Why is it important? How does this person influence you and others? (250-300 words)
Family is always significant in our hearts; it is the one we think of and wish to return to wherever we go. When we think of family, we quickly think of parents, siblings, or other family members. Today I would like to tell you about my father, who has always played a pivotal role in my family.
My father is a farmer, and he has the dark skin and muscular body that farmers usually have. Despite being over 50, the age at which a farmer should retire, Dad continues to work every day, taking care of the Durian garden, ensuring that my family has food to eat, clothes to wear, and my sisters and I will have a better future. My father is important in my family; he always does his best for us. Every time I called or spoke with him, he constantly urged, "You should eat more, and you should drive carefully." Being an introvert himself, my Dad does not reveal his emotions like other fathers, but I know he constantly concerns and worries about me. Whenever he does something, he devotes his entire focus to it until it finishes. He will not easily give up against adversity. I once witnessed him try to fix the machine, but by looking around, I could tell it was too old to operate again, but my father doesn't see it that way; he spent hours fixing it, step by step, and at the end of the day, It worked again. This story inspires me a lot about whether or not I should easily give up and try something more accessible. I always tell myself, "Be like your father, never give up until you succeed, or there's no way to finish it anymore."
When I was a child, I saw my father as a hero, and even today, as an adult, I still see him as someone I should emulate. I hope he stays healthy so I can continue to learn from him on my life's path.
TOPIC
Write a story about a person who inspires you.
What does this person do? Why is it important? How does this person influence you and others? (250-300 words)
Family is always significant in our hearts; it is the one we think of and wish to return to wherever we go. When we think of family, we quickly think of parents, siblings, or other family members. Today I would like to tell you about my father, who has always played a pivotal role in my family.
My father is a farmer, and he has the dark skin and muscular body that farmers usually have. Despite being over 50, the age at which a farmer should retire, Dad continues to work every day, taking care of the Durian garden, ensuring that my family has food to eat, clothes to wear, and my sisters and I will have a better future. My father is important in my family; he always does his best for us. Every time I called or spoke with him, he constantly urged, "You should eat more, and you should drive carefully." Being an introvert himself, my Dad does not reveal his emotions like other fathers, but I know he constantly concerns and worries about me. Whenever he does something, he devotes his entire focus to it until it finishes. He will not easily give up against adversity. I once witnessed him try to fix the machine, but by looking around, I could tell it was too old to operate again, but my father doesn't see it that way; he spent hours fixing it, step by step, and at the end of the day, It worked again. This story inspires me a lot about whether or not I should easily give up and try something more accessible. I always tell myself, "Be like your father, never give up until you succeed, or there's no way to finish it anymore."
When I was a child, I saw my father as a hero, and even today, as an adult, I still see him as someone I should emulate. I hope he stays healthy so I can continue to learn from him on my life's path.
