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Sep 30, 2021
Undergraduate / MIT Essay: I am a BLEND. Cultural Identity short essay. Evaluate my essay. [4]
This is my MIT essay, please evaluate is it according to the topic
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Blend. What do you get in mind listening to the word? A fusion or concoction of varied elements. This is what my cultural background sounds like. Born in a country with diverse culture-changing every mile, people with contrasting perspectives, and parents with distinct values bought me up. More specifically, my mom is from Southern India and my dad is from Northern India, with a common root coming from Eastern India. Sounds like a triangle with three different coordinates. Both had different birth-place and workplaces, so am I, born in dad's city and carrying on my studies from their stem. My weekends, of which I am a great fan, morning with South Indian delicacy, carried with Northern Cuisine and summing up with a blend, which I am, of all the culture I have inhabited. I adore myself to be embedded in an eccentric culture.
This is my MIT essay, please evaluate is it according to the topic
"Please tell us more about your cultural background and identity in the space below"
Rate it on 0-10 !! Thanks to one who cares for evaluating it.
Blend. What do you get in mind listening to the word? A fusion or concoction of varied elements. This is what my cultural background sounds like. Born in a country with diverse culture-changing every mile, people with contrasting perspectives, and parents with distinct values bought me up. More specifically, my mom is from Southern India and my dad is from Northern India, with a common root coming from Eastern India. Sounds like a triangle with three different coordinates. Both had different birth-place and workplaces, so am I, born in dad's city and carrying on my studies from their stem. My weekends, of which I am a great fan, morning with South Indian delicacy, carried with Northern Cuisine and summing up with a blend, which I am, of all the culture I have inhabited. I adore myself to be embedded in an eccentric culture.