Yu Yu
Nov 5, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: Youngsters have problems but the government ignores this. Give solve problems? [4]
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Thanks for correcting my post
Yu Yu
Nov 4, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: Youngsters have problems but the government ignores this. Give solve problems? [4]
We are living in an era of development and innovation so everything gradually becomes better and better. On the other hand, there are still more problems about criminals, discrimination, rich-poor gap,... In which, the problem of young people can not be missing. Because youngsters are very important for future of humanity.
In my opinion, there are tow main problem in the youngsters:
The first, most young people often meet the issue of psychology and ethics. At of age, they have rebellious tendencies and feel without one person understanding them. The way for this is adults should take care young people more than. If youngsters feel alone, adults should listen to them and after give advice but attention avoids force them or judgments. The role of adult people should be a supporter, not a controller.
The second, pressure scores and achievements in school from them parents or someone in the family. Adult in the house impose children their must is good student and do not allow children play, only focus on learn. Everything of children are decided by mature people, such as chose career, interfere in relationships, favourite,... The over supervise cause young people to feel the house is like a prison. Besides, study continually not play leads to stress and they could not they less attitude. And so adult people especially in family should sympathy and promote them study instead of constrain. Educating young people about self-discipline and independence from an early age is more reasonable than restricting them.
After all, youngsters lack experience and they need proper look after by mature people. Because without young people there would be no adults. They are like bricks that make up a strong stronghold of all humans.
Youngsters - the future of humanity
We are living in an era of development and innovation so everything gradually becomes better and better. On the other hand, there are still more problems about criminals, discrimination, rich-poor gap,... In which, the problem of young people can not be missing. Because youngsters are very important for future of humanity.
In my opinion, there are tow main problem in the youngsters:
The first, most young people often meet the issue of psychology and ethics. At of age, they have rebellious tendencies and feel without one person understanding them. The way for this is adults should take care young people more than. If youngsters feel alone, adults should listen to them and after give advice but attention avoids force them or judgments. The role of adult people should be a supporter, not a controller.
The second, pressure scores and achievements in school from them parents or someone in the family. Adult in the house impose children their must is good student and do not allow children play, only focus on learn. Everything of children are decided by mature people, such as chose career, interfere in relationships, favourite,... The over supervise cause young people to feel the house is like a prison. Besides, study continually not play leads to stress and they could not they less attitude. And so adult people especially in family should sympathy and promote them study instead of constrain. Educating young people about self-discipline and independence from an early age is more reasonable than restricting them.
After all, youngsters lack experience and they need proper look after by mature people. Because without young people there would be no adults. They are like bricks that make up a strong stronghold of all humans.