elalan
Apr 18, 2022
Writing Feedback / The chart compares the outcomes of a research on the customers' buying and drink habits in Australia [6]
@Lemonade312
Thank you very much! Your suggestions are very useful to me. I think your methods that classify them by different cities are better! I classify paragraph3&4 by just different coffee options and I find it is hard to write wonderfully.
@Lemonade312
Thank you very much! Your suggestions are very useful to me. I think your methods that classify them by different cities are better! I classify paragraph3&4 by just different coffee options and I find it is hard to write wonderfully.