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Sep 6, 2022
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The reasons of migration to capital city in a particular country (2000 - 2015) [2]
The line graph illustrated the reasons of migrate to capital g a particular country between 2000 and 2015.
Overal, as can be seen from the graph that employement and study increased sharply in the decades from 2000 to 2010. However, whereas employment was a minimal drop, study was a dramatic rise by year the 2015. There were a slight growth in family / friends and adventure in 15 years.
The figures of employment and study were an considerable increase aproximately 5000, 48000 in 2005, respectively. And then, in the next 5 years, the numbers of these two reasons continued to climbed just over 91,000 and 55000 respectively in 2010. By the 2015, while it was a gradual decrease in employment, the figures of study was a sharp upward trend. The number of both employment and study on this period were the same about 88000. During the period from 2000 to 2015, there was a steady rise by 5000 from 10000 to 15000 in adventure. It can be clear that family/friends went up moderately roughly 22000 in decades, and rose gradually by 1000 in 2015.
The reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country
The line graph illustrated the reasons of migrate to capital g a particular country between 2000 and 2015.
Overal, as can be seen from the graph that employement and study increased sharply in the decades from 2000 to 2010. However, whereas employment was a minimal drop, study was a dramatic rise by year the 2015. There were a slight growth in family / friends and adventure in 15 years.
The figures of employment and study were an considerable increase aproximately 5000, 48000 in 2005, respectively. And then, in the next 5 years, the numbers of these two reasons continued to climbed just over 91,000 and 55000 respectively in 2010. By the 2015, while it was a gradual decrease in employment, the figures of study was a sharp upward trend. The number of both employment and study on this period were the same about 88000. During the period from 2000 to 2015, there was a steady rise by 5000 from 10000 to 15000 in adventure. It can be clear that family/friends went up moderately roughly 22000 in decades, and rose gradually by 1000 in 2015.
