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Hi ,

I need to prepare a cover letter for IOWA University. Their question is that :

Address a one-page cover letter to the MBA Admissions Director. It should conform to the standards of business correspondence and illuminate resume items that you believe would be of particular interest to the Admissions Committee. NOTE: Do not simply list items that are included in your application materials.

This is what I have written:

Dear Ms Schafer,

This letter expresses my interest in applying for Tippie School of Management's fall 2010 MBA program.

After comprehensive research into your program, I was pleased with your educational approach such as experiential learning and cultural diverse environment in which I can learn much more from professor and students of many nations. I also learned more about Tippie after talking to Sham Prasad, current first year MBA student in your university.

The enclosed resume provides my inclusive and accomplished background including:
- Over four years of experience in Information Technology
- Experience in leading and mentoring
- Extensive experience in Community work and other activities
- Strong Communication and Interpersonal skills
- Strong Technical and analytical Skills

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Should you require additional information, I can be reached at numbers below.

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Also in the essays for the university I have mentioned about my career goals and significant accomplishments professionally. However I have not mentioned about my extensive Community work etc. What else should i add more. I have attended online chat with the current students ,should I add that as well?

Thanks in advance...