priteshsingh19
Nov 29, 2022
Graduate / The art of storytelling - Texas MSBA essay prompt [3]
Hi @Holt,
Thanks for your prompt assistance! The feedback seems valid now that I re-look at the essay with your insights.
My current thought process was as follows:
I wanted to setup the journey that has helped me acquire my current skill set and identify my personal goals. Then I tried to explain how I feel the course can help the gaps in my theoretical knowledge due to the lack of formal training. <-- I hoped this will answer how MSBA is "next" and "logical" for me.
I specifically referenced quotes from an alum, a course that will help me advance my goals and the opportunities the program offers on campus to develop personally.
If possible, can you please highlight if there are parts that I should absolutely remove, parts I can work around or parts I would need to add to competently answer the prompts?
Hi @Holt,
Thanks for your prompt assistance! The feedback seems valid now that I re-look at the essay with your insights.
My current thought process was as follows:
I wanted to setup the journey that has helped me acquire my current skill set and identify my personal goals. Then I tried to explain how I feel the course can help the gaps in my theoretical knowledge due to the lack of formal training. <-- I hoped this will answer how MSBA is "next" and "logical" for me.
I specifically referenced quotes from an alum, a course that will help me advance my goals and the opportunities the program offers on campus to develop personally.
If possible, can you please highlight if there are parts that I should absolutely remove, parts I can work around or parts I would need to add to competently answer the prompts?