Ruth23
Dec 15, 2022
Graduate / Personal Statement - Oxford MSc Tropical Disease and International Health [3]
The opening line in a personal statement is very critical. It should be eye catching and provides a grimpse of the students intention. Rather than starting by talking about a 24 years mother, the writer should have started with something like.."My passion for tropical disease and internatinal health is dated way back...."
The opening line in a personal statement is very critical. It should be eye catching and provides a grimpse of the students intention. Rather than starting by talking about a 24 years mother, the writer should have started with something like.."My passion for tropical disease and internatinal health is dated way back...."
