BrianWang
Aug 21, 2023
Writing Feedback / The opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field of our life [3]
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
In recent years, most of people hold opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field such as learning, working and our leisure, so on and so forth. By contrast, remain people thinks too much options will lead to a negative. In my mind, this topic would has double-edge. Although it include a bad side, I still stronger believe that it more likely to benefits for us.
We are living in modern life, so everything is keep developing every singe time. Therefore, we could approach with so much modern sector such as internet. For example, technology is as more as enhance so student and worker could finds variety way to meets their teacher and boss like online learning, online meeting respectively. This corresponding with our whom are have a huge choices to make a decision in a particular issue.
It is true that too much choices could run a higher risks for people in present life. Because of so much choices which will leads people getting confuse. So that we will feel hard to find a best choice for ourself. Last but not least, some of our choices could be uncensored due to a developed rate of internet. We could be more struggle to avoiding fake information on social media and it could includes dangerous things.
To conclude, as more as choices is a good announce but we should consider carefully when we want to take interested in somethings.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, most of people hold opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field such as learning, working and our leisure, so on and so forth. By contrast, remain people thinks too much options will lead to a negative. In my mind, this topic would has double-edge. Although it include a bad side, I still stronger believe that it more likely to benefits for us.
We are living in modern life, so everything is keep developing every singe time. Therefore, we could approach with so much modern sector such as internet. For example, technology is as more as enhance so student and worker could finds variety way to meets their teacher and boss like online learning, online meeting respectively. This corresponding with our whom are have a huge choices to make a decision in a particular issue.
It is true that too much choices could run a higher risks for people in present life. Because of so much choices which will leads people getting confuse. So that we will feel hard to find a best choice for ourself. Last but not least, some of our choices could be uncensored due to a developed rate of internet. We could be more struggle to avoiding fake information on social media and it could includes dangerous things.
To conclude, as more as choices is a good announce but we should consider carefully when we want to take interested in somethings.
_Thanks teacher for marked my essay_