Graduate / "Passion in life..." - Statement of purpose for electrical and computer department [7]

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Graduate / "Passion in life..." - Statement of purpose for electrical and computer department [7]

Thai Electronics industry's, please review my SoP on Electrical Engineering

This is my second version of SoP. Please be hurry since the deadline is coming closer(15 DEC).

From Intel 4004 to Corei5...