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Nov 24, 2025
Undergraduate / Forensic pathology - essay for NTU mbbs- personal statement [3]
PS:paragraph 2 and 3 of ver1&2 are same,only different are 1st&4th paragraph.I am willing to hear your advices and improve it thankyou.
version1:
When my grandfather died, it was my first experience of death. It made me start thinking about life and death. The disaster films and documentaries I watched, alongside the knowledge I acquired, taught me to cherish life. They also led me to decide to become a doctor. I am aware that death is inevitable, but medicine offers hope to humanity. Becoming a doctor means I will have the ability to help others, and that is what I am willing to fight for.
During my time at school, I had organised society's event for the school anniversary three times, and served as vice-president of the society to improve my judgement and decision-making abilities.Through consistently participating in club activities over the past few years, I have improved my communication and problem-solving skills when interacting with fellow members, teachers, and even strangers.
When I served as vice-chair in my society's event for the school anniversary, it was challenging to oversee my teammates' work and balancing it with my studies. Luckily, my partners were supportive ,we had hours of meetings to perfect the event. My habit of pre-assessing plan feasibility, preparing backup options, and meticulously documenting the entire process helps a lot. Eventually, all our hard work paid off and we saved all those document for future organizers as reference materials.
I never regret my decisions, and I never make promises lightly. This makes me more willing than others to stand by my choices and accept the consequences that come with them. I am well aware that becoming a doctor involves immense ethical and academic pressure, which should not be underestimated .Yet I am certain in my decision and I would like to enrol at LKCMedicine to begin working towards this goal.
version2:
Becoming a doctor is no simple matter, particularly for someone like me, who doesn't know any medical professionals.It seems utterly out of reach. However, as time flies, the disaster films and documentaries I watched, alongside the knowledge I acquired, shaped who I am today and crystallised my interest in medicine. Consequently, I chose to enter science class and began organising various events.
During my time at school, I had organised society's event for the school anniversary three times, and served as vice-president of the society to improve my judgement and decision-making abilities.Through consistently participating in club activities over the past few years, I have improved my communication and problem-solving skills when interacting with fellow members, teachers, and even strangers.
When I served as vice-chair in my society's event for the school anniversary, it was challenging to oversee my teammates' work and balancing it with my study. Luckily, my partners were supportive ,we had hours of meetings to perfect the event. My habit of pre-assessing plan feasibility, preparing backup options, and meticulously documenting the entire process helps a lot. Eventually, all our hard work paid off and we saved all those document for future organizers as reference materials.
I never regret my decisions, and I never make promises lightly. This makes me more willing than others to stand by my choices and accept the consequences that come with them. I am well aware that becoming a doctor involves immense ethical and academic pressure, which should not be underestimated. Yet I am certain in my decision because I know that my goal is to become a forensic pathologist, I want to do my best to make sure the deceased rests in peace and I would like to enrol at LKCMedicine to begin working towards this goal.
PS:paragraph 2 and 3 of ver1&2 are same,only different are 1st&4th paragraph.I am willing to hear your advices and improve it thankyou.
version1:
When my grandfather died, it was my first experience of death. It made me start thinking about life and death. The disaster films and documentaries I watched, alongside the knowledge I acquired, taught me to cherish life. They also led me to decide to become a doctor. I am aware that death is inevitable, but medicine offers hope to humanity. Becoming a doctor means I will have the ability to help others, and that is what I am willing to fight for.
During my time at school, I had organised society's event for the school anniversary three times, and served as vice-president of the society to improve my judgement and decision-making abilities.Through consistently participating in club activities over the past few years, I have improved my communication and problem-solving skills when interacting with fellow members, teachers, and even strangers.
When I served as vice-chair in my society's event for the school anniversary, it was challenging to oversee my teammates' work and balancing it with my studies. Luckily, my partners were supportive ,we had hours of meetings to perfect the event. My habit of pre-assessing plan feasibility, preparing backup options, and meticulously documenting the entire process helps a lot. Eventually, all our hard work paid off and we saved all those document for future organizers as reference materials.
I never regret my decisions, and I never make promises lightly. This makes me more willing than others to stand by my choices and accept the consequences that come with them. I am well aware that becoming a doctor involves immense ethical and academic pressure, which should not be underestimated .Yet I am certain in my decision and I would like to enrol at LKCMedicine to begin working towards this goal.
version2:
Becoming a doctor is no simple matter, particularly for someone like me, who doesn't know any medical professionals.It seems utterly out of reach. However, as time flies, the disaster films and documentaries I watched, alongside the knowledge I acquired, shaped who I am today and crystallised my interest in medicine. Consequently, I chose to enter science class and began organising various events.
During my time at school, I had organised society's event for the school anniversary three times, and served as vice-president of the society to improve my judgement and decision-making abilities.Through consistently participating in club activities over the past few years, I have improved my communication and problem-solving skills when interacting with fellow members, teachers, and even strangers.
When I served as vice-chair in my society's event for the school anniversary, it was challenging to oversee my teammates' work and balancing it with my study. Luckily, my partners were supportive ,we had hours of meetings to perfect the event. My habit of pre-assessing plan feasibility, preparing backup options, and meticulously documenting the entire process helps a lot. Eventually, all our hard work paid off and we saved all those document for future organizers as reference materials.
I never regret my decisions, and I never make promises lightly. This makes me more willing than others to stand by my choices and accept the consequences that come with them. I am well aware that becoming a doctor involves immense ethical and academic pressure, which should not be underestimated. Yet I am certain in my decision because I know that my goal is to become a forensic pathologist, I want to do my best to make sure the deceased rests in peace and I would like to enrol at LKCMedicine to begin working towards this goal.
