newsdrms
Dec 28, 2009
newsdrms
Dec 28, 2009
Speeches / What don't you know - a speech to God [25]
I liked your essay. I think contractions should be ok since you are using quotations. What I would fix in the first paragraph would be to condense a little by getting rid of exact moment or carefully chosen and just use moment and chosen. For me it still has the same meaning or effect but seems a little less redundant. That would just be a matter of style. If you could please look at my essay and lmk what you think? Thanks!
I liked your essay. I think contractions should be ok since you are using quotations. What I would fix in the first paragraph would be to condense a little by getting rid of exact moment or carefully chosen and just use moment and chosen. For me it still has the same meaning or effect but seems a little less redundant. That would just be a matter of style. If you could please look at my essay and lmk what you think? Thanks!
newsdrms
Dec 27, 2009
Undergraduate / Emotional, multicultural, and optimist - My BU Essay [5]
In an essay 500 words or less select 3 words that describe you and how you will use those qualities/characteristics to contribute fully to the BU community.
English is not my native language so any help I appreciated, Thanks.
I know that I cannot be described in three words, but if I am to use just three words they are emotional, multicultural, and optimist. These words best help describe my interaction with people and characteristics that will help benefit the Boston University community.
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In an essay 500 words or less select 3 words that describe you and how you will use those qualities/characteristics to contribute fully to the BU community.
English is not my native language so any help I appreciated, Thanks.
I know that I cannot be described in three words, but if I am to use just three words they are emotional, multicultural, and optimist. These words best help describe my interaction with people and characteristics that will help benefit the Boston University community.
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