Graduate / PHD Organizational Behavior SOP [3]

Hi,
I recently came across this forum and I'm hoping to get some honest feedback on my statement of purpose. This is my first draft, so any input would be appreciated. Thank you for your time!

My desire to pursue a Ph.D. in Organizational Science came about in a rather serendipitous way. After graduating from the University of xxx in 2005, the only thing I was certain of in life was that I need to find a job, quickly.

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