Zem7
Feb 5, 2008
Zem7
Feb 4, 2008
Essays / Thesis Statement of "Performance Enhancing Drugs in Sport" [6]
Help with my thesis for Performance - Enhancing Drugs and Athletes
I need some help making my thisis more arguable, and maybe worded a litte better.
This is what i have right now:
Due to the use of performance - enhancing drugs by professional athletes there has been increased use at the high school level, their athletics as well as academics are suffering because of the focus on the drugs athletes are using and the negative effects that they cause.
Any suggestions would be great!
Help with my thesis for Performance - Enhancing Drugs and Athletes
I need some help making my thisis more arguable, and maybe worded a litte better.
This is what i have right now:
Due to the use of performance - enhancing drugs by professional athletes there has been increased use at the high school level, their athletics as well as academics are suffering because of the focus on the drugs athletes are using and the negative effects that they cause.
Any suggestions would be great!