determinedgirl
Dec 29, 2009
Undergraduate / Essay for Harvard, Yale, Stanford - What impression do you get? Is it arrogant? [14]
Thanks for the comment. Definitely helps.
Your essay is wonderful. It paints a very powerful picture of what kind of person you are.
there needs to an "a" before "university.
The essay spans alot of topics, but I think it works for you. Good luck!
Thanks for the comment. Definitely helps.
Your essay is wonderful. It paints a very powerful picture of what kind of person you are.
I hope that at university and in life I can share this aspiration with others, the reason I want to step through that lamp-lit golden door.
there needs to an "a" before "university.
The essay spans alot of topics, but I think it works for you. Good luck!
