Research Papers / Hansen's disease - thesis statement works! [2]

title of my research paper is Hansen's disease:Leprosy, a disease bought
by Mycobacterium leprae

would it be right if my thesis statement will be...

thesis statement:

among all the different kinds of bacterias mycobacterium leprae, an acid-fast rod and also an obligate intracellular organism gives birth to infectious disease known as leprosy.