Poetry / Required: Write a haiku, limerick, or short (eight lines or less) poem that best represents you. [3]

Could you guys take a look at my poem too?

Required Write a haiku, limerick, or short (eight lines or less) poem that best represents you.

A ghost in a city of lights,
his eyes strain to catch,
the glimmer of the stars.

What do you guys think? Too short?

Undergraduate / NYU Supplement - Spending a day with Michelangelo of the ninja turtles! [11]

If you had the opportunity to spend one day in New York City with a famous New Yorker, who would it be and what would you do? (Your New Yorker can be anyone -past or present, fictional or nonfictional - who is commonly associated with New York City; they do not necessarily have to have been born and raised in New York.)

I would love to spend the day with the hero of my childhood, Michelangelo of the Ninja Turtles. Risking his life to protect a city that hated him because he was different, always looking at the bright side no matter what hardships come his way, Mikey inspired me to care less about what the world thought of me and be truer to myself. Our day would be spent touring the sights of NYC, and we'll have a blast even if the odd person or two runs away screaming at the sight of a giant mutant turtle!

I chose Michelangelo because I wanted to be more original, but does the response work?