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i_m_mimi   
Mar 22, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

Hey Yang, long time no talk. xD
I just wanted to say thanks a lot for helping me again. :D
I GOT IN :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
They lost my acceptance letter in the mail and then my friend's mom went to the IB office and found out I got in and that they were kind of sad that they lost my mail.

So yay

Well the acceptances notices were sent on like March 5 and the deadline for response is March 22 and I just found out today. I better go beat the deadline. xD
i_m_mimi   
Jan 14, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

hahaha, those people are really salesmen. You have to pay like 10 dollers just to send in your application. Then if you get in, you have to pay 1200 more for 2 years, while they said The School Board pays for most of it.

lol frivolous, what a cool word. xD

I just patched up those mistakes you told me, and I think I really do have a gem compared to my first version. Hopefully, IB people are really looking for a well written essay instead of a list.

OOOOO, few more years till I'm a senior and I'm sure enjoying my carefree life now. :D

I think you spent quite a lot of time helping me, even though it was because of misunderstanding in the beginning, so I THANK YOU. THANK YOU A MILLION TIMES A BILLION WHICH EQUALS A ZILLION. (I think?)

March 5 is when the Acceptance notices are sent, and I think it would be cool to let you know if I got in or not. If I did, I bet your help in my biography was a major deciding factor ;D
i_m_mimi   
Jan 12, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

Well, you said: haha, you could be the guy who had a baby lol
That totally reminded me of that prego teacher. Ya I'm pretty random.
LOL, once my friend asked in class if he was a woman and on maturnity leave, would he still get paid. The class just like bursted in laughter while prego man tried looking like he was pregnant. HAHA Obviously it wasn't very hard for him.

hahaa, if we say it to his face, he will fail us all on purpose!

I have no idea how he has a beerbelly and skinny at same time, IT IS A MIRACLE! ONLY EXPLANATION: PREGNANCY.

Me and you are in the same box? lol, I think you misunderstood. Probably because I didn't really explain it. During the info. night for Ib, they said on University applications, they have a separate boxes for you to check if you went to AP, or IB because apparently Universities recognize the 'superiority' of the IB program.

Ya, I found this letter I never mailed when I first came to Canada about my expierences with little ducks I saw and stuff. I had great hand writing and could write whole sentenses! I had no idea how I did that, because I don't remember any Chinese now.

It's not that I want to stay in Canada, it's that I want to keep my options open. I would be very open to moving to US.

OK.... on to actual biography work, we getting sidetracked. xD Can you check it for me, and shorten it in anyway? I'm more than 100 words over 500. I found out my friend who got in IB and is almost done IB actually listed all her interests in point form and submitted it. She did Pre-IB for a year, and didn't really need to send in a biography, because the directors already knew her and her work. This same friend also told me not to write I want to join IB because I want to challenge myself. The IB directors which she already knows told her that is much of lies and crap. hahaa I didn't want to erase all my time-consuming revisions, so I decided just to keep it the way it is. Sorry, I just completely got rid of transition because it wouldn't fit into the page. (1 page is max)

I was born in the beautiful province of -----------, China. The heavy workloads in China's schools and Piano lessons made me develop self-discipline at a young age.

The major influence in my life is my mom. My mom inspires me to challenge myself and strive for excellence. She raised me all by herself since I was born and brought me to Canada when I was 8 so I could have more opportunities. She worked in so many late hour jobs to support our family. She could have chosen the easier life in China, but instead she chose to move to Canada. She told me never to worry about her, but to concentrate on my own goals. She taught me to learn as much as I could because as she says in Chinese: "knowledge is infinite power".

Bedtime stories always excited me, and sprouted my love for reading. I read anything from Fiction to Historical. In grade four, I tried to read Harry Potter but I couldn't understand it, so my mom made me search up every word I didn't know in the dictionary. Then I had to search up unknown words from the definition. It was exhausting, but I finished the book. This skill had stayed with me and the dictionary has been immensely helpful. My English skills shot up from reading and ever since, I found out books are powerfully engaging containing the most fascinating wells of knowledge. Books are an addiction to me now; I always have a pile of books on my nightstand.

I went to ------------'s Mini School program and found it hard in the beginning. I almost even failed French, my weakest subject, because I had no time to work on it when I had 5 other accelerated subjects to worry about. Four of my friends had already decided to drop out of Mini School, and few low marks really discouraged me. I wasn't a quitter, and I have been through tougher obstacles before! I looked at my problems more closely and realized I been a big procrastinator for a while. I began to use my agenda and planned minutely everything I would be doing during the day. At first I felt I didn't have any free time, and frustration often took over me. After a few weeks of careful time management, I started having whole weekends to relax and tests were no longer stressful. As a result of this experience, my organization and efficiency skills tremendously improved.

Challenges occur mentally, but physically as well. I love sports, and I joined a variety of teams, from football to badminton. My favourite would be basketball. It was new to me when I first joined in grade 4, but I love new experiences. Being the youngest, shortest, and a clumsy girl, everyone thought I would be terrible. I hated it when people under-estimated me; it only made me try harder. Though I was not great, I listened carefully to the coach and never missed a practice. When it came down to sports, I fought through injuries and discrimination to play my best on the floor. Basketball taught me cooperation and teamwork. By the end of the season, I was not only a strong player, but I also earned the team's respect and the Most Inspirational Award and MVP.

I participate in many things. I'm in the International Action Club that fundraises to build a school in Ecuador. I'm also a big fan of art, from textiles to painting because I'm a creative person. Just this year, I realize I'm passionate about Theatre Arts and hope to join a school's theatre company. Performing just feels natural and exhilarating to me.

Ultimately, I have always loved learning and IB would be my biggest opportunity to learn. I do want to contribute to --------------'s many clubs, teams and the global community. I can make the world better by doing small things like planning fundraisers, and volunteering. I love nothing more than the feeling of accomplishment and knowing my efforts are worthwhile. I am a well-rounded, self motivated learner that could apply my skills to any obstacle.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 12, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

LOLOLOLOOOLOOLLLLLLLLLL! Are you phychic? hahahaha, last year we had this terrible Mini School Math teacher and he was such a terrible teacher, that many kids failed and dropped out of Mini because of him. He has like the biggest beer belly, but he's soo skinny! We all called him the pregnant man and made whole bunch of jokes behide his back. LOL, like planning to kill his baby. We're like maybe we should ask him when he is due? Man, kids are mean. xD

We only have AP in one school. Enriched in all schools.
IB is in a different box when you go into university, just like AP. If you really want to know about it, then visit the ibo.org place.

Ya, City of the Chinese! HIYA, we are going to take over the world.
You have to take French in grade 8, but I chose to continue taking it till grade 12, because I live in Canada and that would be more useful than any other lanuage. Chinese is my native lanuage, so no point in trying to learn it.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 12, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

IB is all over the world. There are two Ib program schools in my city.

Yup yup, I'm a girl, unless I go though puberty and turn up into something else. JK JK. xD
I live in Vancouver.
My choice for next year would be try to get into IB, or go to A.P. classes or go enriched. IB is my first choice. :D
i_m_mimi   
Jan 12, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

hahahahahaaaa, NO! It's ok. You are very very very helpful, and part of this IB program is all about writing essays. I will have to do that all day long if I do get into this program. I'll combine my first version, with all my other versions and make the most awesomest thing ever. Those directors better watch out, cause I have a pro University dude helping me write my thing. xD You are totally right about the being different thing. Also, you, yourSELF (I REMEBERED) have taken so much time to help me, and I learned a lot. :D So thank you. I'll write my very last version, and post it by Friday. (I hope it's the last unless I need more help) Can you help me check that? Again, I don't know how to thank you enough.

I live in Canada, so I don't take SATs. I will have to take grade 10 provincials this year. They have an entry test end of this month for IB.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 12, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

High school program, I'm technically in grade 9 now. (Taking Physical Education 9) I'll be done grade 10 this year. International Baccalaureate is for grade 11 and 12 and finishes a lot of 1st year university. If you want, the website is ibo.org, but not really useful for you to look. xD

Ya, I really admire your pro skills and approach. :D
i_m_mimi   
Jan 11, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

Sometimes, I feel like I'm moving away from the biography and outlining interests prompt with all this stuff. Am I? xD I'll work on it and hopefully have a really different revision tmr. Ganna try to tackle this a different way. WORK BRAIN WORK! Uhhhh, LOL, I don't want to come off as 'lonely' because I'm a very social person naturally. They just didn't think I was good at basketball, and thought of me as a little girl. xD I'm sure this will be a gem. :D Also, the director of the IB program is concerned about social problems because if I do get into IB I will be at a completely different school and in classes with people a grade older. I'm sure this won't be a problem for me, because I have in the past dealt with this before with moving so many times across my city. Don't want to come off to the director the wrong way.

edit:
....OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, you're talking about your essay xD I think I'm too tired.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 11, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

Sorry, if I'm frustrating you. xD LOL, I'm pretty much ripping out clumps of hair my self trying to make it awesome. I was trying to focus on a paragraph at a time, so I could get the in depth idea down. Again, much thanks! I tried to put in transition. HAHAHAHHAHA, I could imagine the admin dude getting confused with the metal checks. P.S. I haven't really done anything for the Introduction and Ending paragraph, so I just didn't add it in. Here it is.

My mom inspires me to challenge myself and strive for excellence. She raised me all by herself since I was born and brought me to Canada when I was 8 so I could have more opportunities. She worked in so many late hour jobs to support our family. She could have stayed in China and had an easier life, but instead she chose to move to Canada, for my sake. She told me never to worry about her, but to concentrate on my own goals. Seeing how hard my mom works everyday truly moved me and pushed me to try my hardest in school. She kept reminding me to learn as much as I could because as she says in Chinese: "knowledge is infinite power".

(Hmmmmm, I'm kind of over 500 words, but that is not the problem now. I think adding the my mom's hard work moves me isn't that important beauase I have already said it in the beggining of the paragraph. I might erase it. If you think I should keep it, then I will)

Growing up, my mom has read the most exciting stories every night. That has sprouted my love for reading. I read anything from Fiction to Historical. In grade four, I tried to read Harry Potter but I couldn't understand it, so my mom made me search up every word I didn't know in the dictionary. Then I had to search up unknown words from the definition. It was exhausting, but I finished the book. This skill had stayed with me and the dictionary has been immensely helpful. Ever since, I found out books are powerfully engaging containing the most fascinating wells of knowledge. Books are an addiction to me now; I always have a pile of books on my nightstand.

(My friend actually told me she loved this paragraph and should keep it the way it is. xD)

When I'm not reading, I focus on schoolwork. I went to Gladstone's Mini School program and found it hard in the beginning. I almost even failed French, my weakest subject, because I had no time to work on it when I had 5 other accelerated subjects to worry about. Three of my friends had already decided to drop out of the Mini School, and a few low marks really discouraged me. I, of course had thoughts of quitting my self, but then I thought of my mom. She told me that setbacks will only make you better, never quit half way. I looked at my problems more closely and realized I been a big procrastinator for a while. I began to use my agenda and planned minutely everything I would be doing during the day. At first I felt I didn't have any free time, and frustration often took over me. After a few weeks of careful time management, I started having whole weekends to relax and tests were no longer stressful. As a result of this experience, my organization skills tremendously improved and I became a much more efficient person.

Challenges come mentally, but physically as well. I joined a variety of teams, from football to badminton. My favourite would be basketball. I didn't know anything about basketball when I first joined in grade 4, but I love new experiences. When I joined, all the other players were at least a year older. Being the youngest, shortest, and a clumsy girl, I got made fun of few times and everyone thought I would be terrible. I hated it when people under-estimated me; it only made me try harder. Though I was not great, I listened carefully to the coach and never missed a practice. When it comes down to sports, I fight through injuries and discrimination to play my best on the floor. Basketball taught me how to cooperate with others and work as a team. By the end of the season, I was not only a strong player, but I also earned the Most Inspirational Award.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 11, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

I wrote a few paragraphs trying to go in depth on the subject. Which three do you think are particularly strong? Any other advice would be helpful. Thank you so much, for all this expertise and taking your time to help me.

One inspiration for me to challenge my self and strive for excellence is my mom. She raised me all by her self since I was born, and brought me to Canada when I was 8, so I could have more opportunities. She worked so many different jobs into late hours. She could have stayed in China, and had an easier life, but she chose Canada instead. She told me never to worry about her, but to concentrate on my own goals. She is like Super Women to me taking on challenges everyday. One philosophy she taught me, that I believe in very strongly is to learn as much as I can because knowledge is power and infinite. (I thought I would put my mom in a paragraph, because she is a big part of my life. Also, I could like blend coming to Canada in here.)

I joined a variety of teams, from football to badminton. I didn't know anything about basketball when I first joined, but I love new experiences. Everyone thought I would be terrible because I was a short, clumsy girl; they under-estimated me. Though I was not great, I listened carefully to the coach and never missed a practice. I also learned how to cooperate with others and work as a team. By the end of the season, I was not only a strong player, but I also earned the Most Inspirational Award. (I didn't really change anything to this paragraph, it has always been like non-thinking when I played basketball. That's why I love it so much.)

I always had a love for reading. I read anything from Fiction to Historical. In grade four, I tried to read Harry Potter. I couldn't understand it, so my mom made me search up every word I didn't know in the dictionary. Then I had to search up unknown words from the definition. It was exhausting, but I finished the book. This skill had stayed with me and the dictionary has been immensely helpful. Ever since, I found out books are powerfully engaging containing the most fascinating wells of knowledge. Books are an addiction to me now; I always have a pile of books on my nightstand.

In the beginning, I found the Mini School program hard. I even almost failed French, my weakest subject. I didn't have any time to work on my French when I had 5 other accelerated subjects to worry about. I was quite a big procrastinator for a while, until I began to use my agenda and planned minutely everything I would be doing during the day. At first I felt I didn't have any free time. After a few weeks of careful time management, I started having whole weekends to relax and tests were no longer stressful. As a result of this experience, my organization skills tremendously improved and I became a much more efficient person.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 11, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

I just focused on that one part in paragraph 5. I revised it again, do you think I'm going along the right track?

In the beginning, I found the Mini School program hard. I even almost failed French, my weakest subject. I didn't have any time to work on my French when I had 5 other accelerated subjects to worry about. A big problem of mine was procrastination. I decided to start using my agenda, and planning every hour of the day. I would finish this subject's homework, then eat dinner, then finish another subject's homework. At first I felt I had no time to hang out with my friends or do anything fun. After a few weeks of careful time management, I started having whole weekends to relax! Tests were no longer stressful. My organization skills developed and I had learned from my mistakes. My little agenda, a thin book pulled me though 1st term. I adjusted and now I find Mini School quite easy.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 10, 2010
Undergraduate / Bucknell Supp -- Question (plans, major) [4]

I think like if your major was Marine Biology, you could take a different minor like Computer Science. I am a bit confused about this, too. Then perhaps, you would take other subjects for having a different minor that is required for that minor.
i_m_mimi   
Jan 10, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

Thanks for the great advice Yang! I didn't realize my name would be shown. LOL, so much for remaining anonymous. I tried to follow your advice, and revised it. I think it's less 'fluffy'? Any further advice would be great and much appreciated!
i_m_mimi   
Jan 9, 2010
Undergraduate / Auto-biography and serious advice [25]

MY HW:
A 500-word biography that outlines your educational and extracurricular interests. Please include an explanation of why you wish to participate in the International Baccalaureate program and what you believe you could contribute.

I am about 100 words over 500. I really don't know how to shorten it. You can pull out information if you think it is irrelevant. Also, please check over my English and give serious advice. Thank you a lot!

P.S. I have just blanked ''------------'' some places because I want to remain anonymous. BTW: The mini school program allows a student to finish grade 8,9, and 10 in just 2 years.

I was born in China, where I attended 2 years of school. In China, there is a big workload starting from grade one. Self-discipline is a must, which I developed at a young age. I remember begging my parents to enroll me in Piano lessons. With long hours of practice consisting of many mistakes, I learned what determination and perseverance were really about and was able to improve. Sometimes, the workload and lessons brought me near tears, but in the end, the feeling of achievement was always worth it.

Then I moved to Canada. I learned English within a year. Canada is so different from China. In China, they try to teach as many things to you as possible, while in Canada they set plates of knowledge and you must take them yourself. I try to learn as much as I can because knowledge is power and infinite. I can never know enough; I may need something in the future, or I might never use it again after my high school career.

I joined a variety of teams, from football to badminton. I didn't know anything about basketball when I first joined, but I love to experience new things. I applied learning how to play the piano to sports. I also learned how to cooperate with others and work as a team. By the end of the season, I was not only a strong player, but I also earned Most Inspirational and Captain Sports Award. I involved myself in things like Student council, Library and Drama Club, and always participated in as many things as I can.

In grade 4, my English was good, but not great yet. I was striving for an A in English, and always came close with a B. I started reading, and I found out books are powerfully engaging containing the most fascinating wells of knowledge. I read from Fiction to Historical to Self How-To books. Within, a year of reading, my English skills shot up.

While other kids seemed to be groaning about school, I absolutely loved it! I was always looking for ways to challenge my self and learn new things. I went to -------------Secondary's Mini School Program. It provided a challenge and required high academic achievement. In the beginning, I found the Mini School program hard, I even almost failed a class but I was able to pull though 1st term, adjust and now I find Mini School quite easy. I continued to involve my self in sports and clubs. I joined the International Action Club, where we try to raise money to build a school in a developing country. I wanted to provide some other child with at least one opportunity like school. I'm a big fan of art, from textiles, to drawing to painting. Just this year, I realized how much I love the theatre arts, and I am very interested in becoming a part of my school's Theatre Company or even --------------'s.

I wanted to continue challenging my self and I found the International Baccalaureate Program. IB would be my biggest opportunity to be challenged not just at a provincial or national level, but on international standards. At the core of the IB program is making the world a better place and having a balanced education. I can make the world a better place and will contribute to ---------------s many clubs and the global community. I plan to participate in things like fundraising for charities. I am a well-rounded learner that could apply my knowledge to the world. IB would fulfill my love and need of learning.
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