kabutar
Jan 17, 2010
Graduate / Having a minor freakout over tailoring essays to fit [4]
thanks for the reply! and hmm. Well, it's basically the last paragraph in the essay. the reason I wrote it the way I did was because the essay itself was a bit holistic/abstract and going into details about profs and such would have killed the flow. I could have been a bit more specific admittedly, but I couldn't have done a full-on 'why X' thing. Also, I did take some care - I made sure to mention the university name at least 2-3 times plus the program name etc so it's not just a throwaway sentence lol.
thanks for the reply! and hmm. Well, it's basically the last paragraph in the essay. the reason I wrote it the way I did was because the essay itself was a bit holistic/abstract and going into details about profs and such would have killed the flow. I could have been a bit more specific admittedly, but I couldn't have done a full-on 'why X' thing. Also, I did take some care - I made sure to mention the university name at least 2-3 times plus the program name etc so it's not just a throwaway sentence lol.
