Undergraduate / English, my favorite subject; University of Toronto SAF [4]

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*What is your favourite subject and why? (100 words or less)
My favourite subject is Literatures In English because it allows me to discover the writing talent of so many intellectuals in the world. It has enabled me to be more analytical and comprehensive in all other aspects of my life. This subject has given me a chance to explore so many interesting ideas, theories and points of view and has contributed to my overall growth as an individual. I have been able to develop my writing ability, broaden my perspective on various issues and build an understanding of the many dimensions of the human experience.

*Why are you interested in this program? (100 words or less)
I believe that having the opportunity to study International Studies would help me to broaden my perspective on the world. It would allow me to gain an understanding on the diverse global forces that have transformed our world into what it is today. This program covers a wide range of subjects that grasp my interest and I think that it would enable me to develop my communication skills. I believe that this program would enable me to be a part of the growing global community and play an active role in its development.

*What experiences and skills might you bring to this field? (100 words or less)
I believe that my exposure to different languages has assisted me in developing my excellent verbal and written communication skills which would be an asset to this field. My experience at school has allowed me to develop my interpersonal and leadership skills and I would say that it has also helped me to be a good team player. I think that I have good problem solving skills and I am able to work under pressure. I am also very adaptable and I have great initiative to be successful at whatever I undertake.

*Please describe your writing and communication skills, indicating particular strengths or weaknesses (100 words or less):
I believe that my verbal and written communication skills are excellent. Due to my study of Modern Languages in school, I think that I have developed an intense interest in communication. My essay writing skills are particularly strong since I have good structure, strong ideas and my language is fluent. However, my weaknesses would include being over analytical and too wordy. Nevertheless, my strengths surpass these and I am able to clearly send my message across to my audience.