Anlissa
Feb 7, 2010
Speeches / Writing a speech on Queen Elizabeth I [3]
Im trying to write this speech on Queen Elizabeth I and i need some help on my thesis statement. What i have so far is Queen Elizabeth is an important part in England's history; she had such an interesting life from before she was Queen to when she ruled, also she did many remarkable things while in power.
Im only in 9th grade and im not sure if this is high school work. I want my thesis to be better but dont know what elts to put, or how to change it to be a really good thesis. i have to have three body paragraphs and the three things in my thesis that tell about them. I need help...Can you help me?
Im trying to write this speech on Queen Elizabeth I and i need some help on my thesis statement. What i have so far is Queen Elizabeth is an important part in England's history; she had such an interesting life from before she was Queen to when she ruled, also she did many remarkable things while in power.
Im only in 9th grade and im not sure if this is high school work. I want my thesis to be better but dont know what elts to put, or how to change it to be a really good thesis. i have to have three body paragraphs and the three things in my thesis that tell about them. I need help...Can you help me?
