Scholarship / "criminal justice field" - educational and career goals-7500 character limit [2]

1.Discuss your educational and career goal.

My educational goal is to major in the criminal justice field. Achieving this goal will help me further my career and make a better life for myself and my family. I will be the first one in my family to attend college. The reason I want to become a police officer is to protect my community and my country.

So far i have this but i need more.