Posts by emersonjosh

emersonjosh

Apr 1, 2008

Essays / Essay on Emergency Medical careers - need some assistance [3]

Thank You Sarah,
Even though I didn't give you much to work with, you actually just really helped me out. Because I was trying to get an intro that has that amount of zing I guess you could say. Well anyway I think what your doing on this site is great, and I think you already know that what your doing is helping a lot of people.

emersonjosh

Mar 31, 2008

Essays / Essay on Emergency Medical careers - need some assistance [3]

Ok, as an intro, my names Josh and I go to a small community college in a small town. I won't really give out much more info then that. But I'm writing a essay on Emergency Medical careers, as in EMT's, Firefighters and what have you. I've written the body of the essay and the conclusion, I just can't get an introduction that I really like. Ultimately I've gone through about 15 intro's and just end up erasing them. This topic is something I am very passionate about considering I am an EMT-B and a Firefighter-1 and although I'm just starting out I've probably seen more then I should. But any advice would help.

Thanks.