Writing Feedback / media is responsible to create violence in young are u agree or disagree? [5]

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Nowadays,mostly people think that media is responsible to create violence in young people due to raised in our society.but i totally disagree with this b/c of some reason that i lighted below.

firstly media is a very fast electronic invention that update you about whatever happining in the world and also things that occuring in your society and gives the real picture. it telecast news,about science and technology,about education,researches and gives information about each and every thing of life ,however it gives different programmed based on violence and glamour but it still contain a message ,those who attemted this is wrong and submitted to prision.

furthermore ,the violence in young is increased b/c in these days parents are very busy ,both of them doing job to fullfill all the luxury of life for their kids but at the same time the kids are feel lonely at home feel too much depressed and as well as be upsets ,there in no one to guide him so they go out and act as agressively and being violent .

in my view,media is not responsible for this.it is the responsibility of parents to give the quality time of their young ones ,keep eyes on their activities and also guide them by conversation to him and by talked about your personnel previous experiences of lives and others so they remember it as a lesson.secondly government should keep strict rules for those who attempt any violence activity,and give them punish that will be act as a lesson not to involves in these activities other wise go to prison.third and last media should telecast different

programmes based on these violence activities and what concequencess are occured after this.