Undergraduate / (Leadership experiences) University of Washington Undergraduate Business school [4]

this is good however I highly suggest changing the syntax and style of this. it is very basic and it is just you restating it...rather than telling the story....you should SHOW how you evolved and the things you have learned and what not through the story and then your reflection following that...rather than saying I blah blah...it is repetitive, and will not get you admitted into the business school.