NayT
Apr 25, 2010
Essays / "Sexual harassment in the workplace" - does this thesis statement make sense? [4]
I understand, but what if I reword the ending
for example:
Despite common belief, sexual harassment in the workplace is more about power and authority than sex; the victim's experience after the attack proves to be more damaging than the original harassment with adverse effect on victim's health, environment and even the legal system leads victims to believe they provoked the attack.
I understand, but what if I reword the ending
for example:
Despite common belief, sexual harassment in the workplace is more about power and authority than sex; the victim's experience after the attack proves to be more damaging than the original harassment with adverse effect on victim's health, environment and even the legal system leads victims to believe they provoked the attack.
