Undergraduate / Entrance of Pharmacy School Essay (need to make briefer) [6]

Please send your thoughts. Writing is not one of my strongest suits.

I am trying to explain that I chose pharmacy as a career because there are many roles available as a pharmacist. I also feel like my opening sentence is too original (this is not my opening paragraph for the essay).

What do you think? I dare you :)

My goal is to continue my role in the field of pharmacy by advancing my studies so that I am able to serve more. Like most curious and conscious consumers I like to know the mechanism of action, the indication, the side effects, behind the brand they are consuming. Thus, I look forward to the constant challenge of keeping up with current literature and being able to summarize it in a useful manner. I have the spirit of keeping an open mind and I think it's crucial to maintain this through all of my experiences. The possibilities are endless in the pharmacy field and I want to explore the options so that I'm able to choose the field that best fits me. I acquired the qualities to handle the responsibilities in the community retail pharmacy setting. Although I also see myself sharing my knowledge academically like serving as a mentor to student pharmacists and residents.