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May 19, 2010
Writing Feedback / Marine Pollution Introductory paragraph [2]
This is the introduction of my 1500 words research essay. Can you guys criticize? Just comment as you think.
Water is the main source of survival for all creatures. In fact, there is a saying, "Rice's life lasts for 7 days, water's life lasts for one morning", which means we cannot survive without water even for a day. But, something is really wrong with some of the sources of water on which every living thing is depending. That is, the marine pollution and it is considered as one of the most serious pollutions because approximately 75% of the Earth is covered with water. The major causes of marine pollution are oil spills, industrial disposals and Carbon dioxide absorption.
This is the introduction of my 1500 words research essay. Can you guys criticize? Just comment as you think.
Water is the main source of survival for all creatures. In fact, there is a saying, "Rice's life lasts for 7 days, water's life lasts for one morning", which means we cannot survive without water even for a day. But, something is really wrong with some of the sources of water on which every living thing is depending. That is, the marine pollution and it is considered as one of the most serious pollutions because approximately 75% of the Earth is covered with water. The major causes of marine pollution are oil spills, industrial disposals and Carbon dioxide absorption.
