Scholarship / medical technology: essay question for internship application [4]

Hi,
I'm applying for medical technology internship, and I have to write why I want to be a medical technologist. It's kind of hard because words are very limited, less than 100. Can somebody help me with this. This is my first draft

"The human element in such relationships is irreplaceable. As a student in the health science field, technology was my other interest. Technology will shape the future of mankind, humanity can touch individual lives. A parallel progress in the advances of medical knowledge and techniques with healthcare accessibility will promote a healthy society. After taking the laboratory and lecture courses in medical technology, the acknowledgment of its impact in medicine inspired me more. As an interpreter, I successfully bridged the communication gap between a doctor and non-English speaking patient to achieve an effective medical treatment. In becoming a medical technologist, I will have more opportunities to be part of interdisciplinary team to save lives with my medical techniques"