Poetry / "I thought it wasn't real" - Holocaust poem [2]

I had to write a poem about an incident that has occurred in the devils arithmetic basycly about the holocaust had to be 3 stanzas ; one simile ; one metaphor ; & 5 sense highlited please tell me if this is goodd thank you so much .

I thought it wasn't real
But as soon as I closed my eyes
Everything seemed so real
No stopping once it begun
A story of a girl I didn't know

But it was still me Cheya
I could feel her hunger
For faith, courage, hope
If only if they would believe me
That they were digging there own graves

Knowing I couldn't help them was the worse
So I stopped and thought
Maybe if I blinked twice
It will all become reality
Thinking if I glanced it all remained the same

As I start seeing what I once heard of
From someone I can't mesmerize
A camp where men and women
Kids and the old showed there arms
And numbers etched in blue

Sufferings I heard they been through
That I would soon go through
To understand and appreciate
And get out of this nightmare
I know I had to go through