Writing Feedback / SAT: QUESTION DECICIONS OF LEADERS [5]

TOPIC: Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority?

In 1998, after sequence of effort, Vietnam initialed in the agreement to become a member of WTO. But in the official to sign in the agreement, Vietnamese leader did not turn up and they declined to become a member of WTO. It is turned out that this year, all the work of the government was not questioned by Vietnamese people and this eliminated a wonderful chance for Vietnam to foster and open its economy to the world through WTO. Therefore, in some cases, taking ideas, decisions of people in positions of authority into consideration is very important.

Lee Kuan Yew is a great Singaporean statesman. As co-founder and first secretary-general of the People's Action Party (PAP), he led the party to a landslide victory in 1959, oversaw the separation of Singapore from the Federation of Malaysia in 1965 and brought Singapore from an underdeveloped colonial outpost with no natural resources into an Asian Tiger. He has remained one of the most influential political figures in Singapore and also other South-East Asia Countries. Therefore, Lee Kuan Yew received all the approval from Singaporean and in this case, questioning him seems to be unnecessary.

However, take a look at the North-South railway project in Vietnam in 2010, everything is contrary. That the Vietnamese Government in early 2010, proposed a high-speed railway plan which cost about $56 billion. While Vietnam is still an underdeveloped country with the gross GDP is about $80 billion, many economists said that this project was unrealistic and it would drive down Vietnam economy significantly. Despite of warning, Vietnamese leaders still numerous time mentioned it with a dream of carrying out it. But now, this project is definitely canceled as it received a widespread disagreement from Vietnamese citizens. If Vietnamese people did not concern or scrutinize it, this project would be a heavy burden for the next generations.

"Sometimes it is necessary to challenge what people in authority claim to be true. Although some respect for authority is, no doubt, necessary in order for any group or organization to function." this is true. Questioning or not should be placed in a harmonious balance so as to take the most advantage of them.

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