Undergraduate / Miami International University of Art & Design; be part of the fashion industry [8]

I'm trying to apply at the Ai-Miami International University of Art and Design.

The prompt is : "Why should you be admitted to the program of your choice at MIU?"
and "How do you expect your education at MIU to help attain you career goal?"

It has to be 150 words and I have 213. Help me please.

This is all I have so far but I'm not sure if it's good enough.

For as long as I can remember I've always wanted to be part of the fashion industry. I didn't know exactly what field could provide me with what I was looking for all I knew is that it had to involve fashion. It wasn't until I came back from a recent trip that I realized Fashion Merchandising offered all the things I'd had long been searching for and who knew that all those hours spent on the computer trend-spotting and looking at clothes was my future hidden in disguise. It has been a great help for me to keep up with the latest fashions giving me ideas of combining clothes and adding that to my daily wardrobe. I am very passionate about my interest and willing to do whatever it takes to make sure I accomplish my goal and that is why I believe I should be admitted to the program. I would apply myself because the learning environment is beneficial to my studies. In a few years from now I can see myself becoming a successful fashion buyer for stores such as Zara and Charlotte Russe. I believe that AI-Miami will provide me with the education I need in order to fulfill my goal and provide a life changing experience.