Essays / A starting sentence? Essay for college entrance exam. [3]

What starting sentence can I use for my college admission essay? by the way my name is Gabriel Garcia

Undergraduate / Things that make me unique and distinct from any other person [4]

Hi, my name is Gabriel Jose E. Garcia and I am currently in 4th year high school in St. Bridget College Batangas. I have been in SBC since I was in kindergarten. I am me. No one knows me better than myself. Like any other young boy, I can also play sports like basketball. I am a decent young boy, silent type, studious and punctual. I am still discovering new things about who I am. I am a silent worker who always wants to have activities. There are many things about me that make me unique and distinct from any other person. The best word that describes me would probably be, "aristocrat". Because I am a man of good social standing. I am an interesting, fun loving guy with a good sense of humor. I can share many of my thoughts that I have in mind. Experiences and challenges have broadened my vision of mankind and made me a proactive person. I can mingle with others to gain more friends everytime. When I was little I used to be scared of clowns and mascots and hide under tables and anything I find to get away from them. My parents taught me to have fear to the almighty God which I did. I was also taught by my parents to respect the older people which I also did. I remember myself being a pessimistic kid, who had never really cared or even thought about my goals in the future. But when the time came that it is time for me to choose a course for college, I started wandering of what course will I take. And I asked myself, what do I want to be after graduating college?